From High School Online Collaborative Writing
[edit] Hey, wake up!
Hey, this is JD, self proclaimed clean up dude. Your article, "8th Street and 2nd Avenue, Manhattan, New York" was recently vandalized by some idiot who likes to talk about drugs, so I deleted it.
Anyways, I think your article should have longer sentences. I don't know why, but they sound cooler. I see from your user page you're an asian High School student too. That's cool.
By the ways, Jesus loves you, no joking about it. Everyday He waits for you to ask Him to be a part of your life. --JD
