Pitkins Street and Euclid Avenue, Brooklyn, New York
From High School Online Collaborative Writing
I see a deserted street with a broken tree on the sidewalk. Parked cars near apartment buliding's and houses. I turn to the left on that block and I see some houses but one of them sticks out to me. I don't know what it is but it just does. There's a car in the driveway. I don't go in the main entrance, I go to the basement, where everyone I love is. There is only gray with graffiti on the walls. I go down the stairs and see that the front door is open. I hear spoons. I can smell the curry chicken cooking. Then I see a little girl standing by the door. She just finished taking a shower. The front door is opened and it's about 30 degrees outside. She shivering. But not as much as she was shivering the say her father died. As time passes by, one hour, two hour, three hour. Mikey and Buck, and Avo come in. Buck and Avo are my brother-in-laws brother. And Mikey is Buck's best friend. "wassup Buck?" I said "sup?" " Hi, Mikey" I said I give Avo a big hug because he is so adorable. My 12 year old little baby. Lol
- Deserted street with a broken tree
- Lying on the side walk
- Cold and alone
- I turned the block
- So many houses
- But only one of them sticks out
- A grey staircase all the way in the back
- Graffiti on the wall
- Opening the door
- I see an 8 year old girl
- Coming out of the shower
- Shivering
- Turning around
- Seeing that the front door is open
- I close it
- Her dad and mom are there
- But now all we will see is her mom
- Not dad
- R.I.P
- Her brother's
- Navin
- Buck
- Avo
- Come in
- We say Hi
- We say Bye
- But not today
- We say Hi
- But I don't say bye
- I hope to see them
- Once again
- If not tomorrow
- Then the next
